This was a fun read. You wrote the action really well, and there was a lot of good dialogue, especially with Hohenheim and Ed. I hope you do more with this.
One thing puzzled me: "You'll be okay," he said. "Ill weeds and all that. There is a saying "Ill winds blow nobody good." Is that what you were referring to, or is there some other reference I'm missing?
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Date: 2007-01-16 11:56 am (UTC)One thing puzzled me: "You'll be okay," he said. "Ill weeds and all that. There is a saying "Ill winds blow nobody good." Is that what you were referring to, or is there some other reference I'm missing?