ext_92646 ([identity profile] criztalinz.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brinylon 2007-01-17 04:58 pm (UTC)

This soo cute! I like heroic!protective!Ed and damsel-in-distress!Roy ^__^.

"You smell very nice," Roy murmured, somewhat dreamily. "Very, very nice. Nice hair too, you're pretty."

"If I find you're fucking me around I'll kill you," Ed got out through gritted teeth, staggering as Roy all but sprawled over him.

"Hmmm?" The man seemed determined bury his face in Ed's hair.

"Roy, this is not the time!" Ed slung an arm around his middle to hoist him up, steering them towards the doorway. "Let's get you to safety, okay? You can grope me later."

"It's a date," Roy said happily and let himself be moved.


Lol.. Roy is adorable!
I like it shows how much Ed loves Roy and Father (and anyone else who dare to come between them) be damned. The humor and seriousness of the fic blends together.
Great job! *hugged bri* ^^

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