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brinylon ([personal profile] brinylon) wrote2006-05-27 08:42 pm

Almost a real drabble: the Secret

(A tiny royxed piece. I'm really nervous again, I'll never get used to showing my work. Aaargh!)

It was quite possibly the best kept secret in all of Amestris: Edward Elric’s military uniform. It hung in it’s protective cover in the master wardrobe, between Roy’s spares in theirs. Pristine, perfectly tailored, complete with trench and dress coat, all the trimmings (he apparently had several decorations, it was truly puke worthy). He had never worn it except for fittings, it was Roy’s little perversion, nothing to do with him.

He had withstood for months, mocking and sneering but the endless pleading, cajoling and outright begging had worn him down. It still irked that he had lost this particular battle. He knew the subject might come up again at any time and he dreaded that time. However, he was now owed the biggest favour ever. He was going to take his time to collect, and make sure he would get sweet revenge.

[identity profile] xeviscerax.livejournal.com 2006-05-27 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
This was cute. I'm hoping someone fanarts this.

[identity profile] fullmetalrose.livejournal.com 2006-05-27 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I liked it! I know I get nervous writing mine and showing it is why it has taken 3 months to post the prologue and 2 chapters. But comments make it worth while!

[identity profile] chrstphrl.livejournal.com 2006-05-28 03:08 am (UTC)(link)
I like it very much. So totally Ed.

[identity profile] carmelised.livejournal.com 2006-06-10 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
the first sentence made me think of brokeback mountain, for a minute. i've read through the rest of your drabbles at royxed, and i think they're calm. domestic. don't take the last as an insult, 'cos i mean it as a compliment! you put the pretty in mundane (: